Hey. This track was quite good. There are some points of criticism I would like to give you. At the beginning, the drums sound out of rhythm when they fade in which kinda annoys my musical taste. And when I first listened to this piece, things just didn't LOCK in a rhythmical way like they are supposed to in a song. I'm not sure if you are doing this on purpose. If you are constructing your songs like this on purpose, then you can ignore this criticism, since it's just my personal preference and style.
Another thing I didn't like was the lyrics at the mid-end part of the song. They were quite pointless to me, but I can't argue with your choice. If you add lyrics, make sure you leave space for them in your mix. Otherwise people can't really hear the lyrics from behind the other instruments. That's what kinda happened on this song, around the mid-end part where there are lyrics and a bunch of other instruments. It's too crowded in there. At least to my ears. :P
But yeah, otherwise it sounded nice. The beat sounded quite nice and groovy. Nice. :P
Oh, and don't take the criticism as negative. I'm just trying to help the best I can. If you want more info on Mixing, you can Google some articles, or just check this guide: http://www.tweakheadz.com/perfect_mix.html
Now. I don't know your level of expertise with all this stuff, whether you are as enthusiastic as me, whether you have a degree or whatever. But I hope you can find some help from the guide above. You should also check some other articles from the site if you like.
And if I have under-estimated your level of understanding and such, I apologise. But I don't know you. :P
LOL That was a long post... Keep on writing music. :)








